All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Like the build up of tension in this brief space....

Love this story and the build up and tension...would love to know what happened next

Excellent short story giving wonderful detail of the lady's feelings to the very direct and demanding man. She explained so well as to how his ways got her turned on. For me it seemed to come from the heart and could well have been an actual event the lady was writing about, it was so authentic

Very nice hearing your feelings as you were taken.

Love the language, earthy and real

This is great...very well written!

This was a great story...very well written

Hello Sharon,

This is Alan from the Lit site. I read your first story like I said I would. I enjoyed it but it was just too short. I am sure as I continue reading your continuing stories, they will further enlighten me about your true innermost submissive impulses and cravings. Hope to soon get to know you even more than I did today. Just say please if you would like that my dear. We can schedule our next chat soon.

Cheers for now - Alan aka Master Alan

Wow it all started with licking your ears.....amazing......

I was surprised at your Submissiveness. Smiled when I was reading it. I am not that kind of guy lol.

I will follow you and read m ore of your stories.

Thank you for sharing.

Such a fantastic erotic read.

I really enjoyed this story of an introduction to BDSM. It is well written and exciting.

so erotic

I love the sensual aspects of this story and the teasing. A+

Extremely well written and highly erotic. I felt I was in the room with them.

Wonderful! Your best story yet. What I enjoyed most about it is how much I can relate to it. The 70s, a shy girl at a party, a date at a hotel restaurant, the convenience of a room right there, and a good girl doing what she’s told. ❤️