All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 07'

The end?

Really the end? What about all the babies? Is Mrs Hudson pregnant? How about the oil pipeline?

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Not "the end" ... Great tale - just simply great!

An excellent story well written and with very good content , but it sounds like the end of it . I may well be wrong but I would have thought that it would have a long way to go still ... still an excellent story

A little short this time, but Really enjoying this story. Hope the next chapter will be out soon.

I hope you do more stories in this series. Very well done and thanks,

Hope there is more of this story. This chapter came in short compared to the others

So sad you’ve ended this story and with only a one page entry.

'The End' is certainly unexpected!!!!

Shame the way you ended this story with a quick 1 page

No no no ...not "the" end...reading this was...spectacular...in amongst all the other stuff...keep going!!!!!

Cant wait for the next installment. I have to go back and read the previous ones when a new one comes out.

There has to be something AFTER a new beginning. I'll be looking for it.

Well that was an unexpected ending.

I’ve enjoyed your writing style, and the story line is excellent. Don’t end it here. Thanks for your hard work and time dedicated to this. Keep going!

Lousy ending it feels like you just gave up and quit

End un-expected. So sorry!

IS THAT IT?

I liked it but I hope you haven’t finished telling this story? I believe you have a lot more to tell!

Sure hate seeing this one end. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed it!

first time I have ever commented on a story. Was looking forward to more. Kind of an unexpected ending. Loved the whole series.

Very good story. I think you ended it about the right time. Thanks.

Would love to see this story continue.

Yep disappointing end to a great series.

Oh no, do not end it yet, Please continue with more!!

5⭐️ story and series,, please don’t end it ,,, this needs to continue on with more

Loved it and hope there is another cumming.

This story cannot end yet, there’s so much more that could be written

Incestgod,

I've reread this series twice now, waiting for this chapter.

Each time thinking what an epic tale you tell.

I'm sure there's work, and life at you end,

but please don't stop here.

His family is growing, and so should the pages of this epic story.

Yours,

WB

Wish it never ended. Best story on here hands down. Should continue and go to print

This is one of the best stories I have read here, I hope you keep it going…

What more can I add to the comments below, just love it and please keep it going you have so many options open to you with the co-op the rail for tracking oil, the bar / drinks, the girls and the tables out the back, not to mention the Boar meat market and fishing !!

I just love how he is always so fair to everyone.

I just loved this story every part!! You should write a book about this bet it would be a best seller!!!!!!!!!! But I think you need to write more and have Mrs Hudson become pregnant with his child and stay with the family and have a big house built for them all too live together!!! 5 Big Stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I look forward to the next set of chapters to the story. It would be a waste if it stopped here. Clearly the oil companies need to send thugs to attempt a take over, and clearly there is a reason for all those guns from the attic. And what about the now pregnant Molly? A whole lot of wonderful possibilities waiting to be told... :-)

I've decided to continue this. Been busy lately, but have started the next chapters.

very good please write more like this!!!!! I could read this all day

There needs to be at least 2 more 4 Part stories added.

I have just reread all 7 parts and really glad that you are going to continue moving forward with this story and all the great characters.

I loved the story. It really hits home ,you tell the story so well. Keep up the good writing. And thank you for sharing.

Great story. Be great to have a follow up