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Click hereOver the next few weeks, I settled into a routine of working on Tuesday, Wednesday, Friday and Saturday and not a single working day went by without a client, some days just the one, one Friday I peaked at five. I'd almost cleared my debts, and I felt great. I had seen all kinds of men, including another with a premature ejaculation problem and one poor guy who just couldn't get hard, no matter what we tried. I felt comfortable that I could now give pretty expert blowjobs, handjobs and knew how to take a cock in my pussy so the guy really enjoyed it. I was also learning to read them, finding out when to be vocal, screaming for them to fuck me harder, or to be quiet, making little moans for them, or pretending their cock was the biggest I'd ever seen and then telling them how much they were stretching me open as they took me. I actually found that I quite liked my work, even if most of the men were never guys, I would have considered if they'd met me in a bar or were just plain weird. I found a way to accept them and attend to their needs.
For a while, the most awkward thing for me had been the lies. It was a real problem, I hated lying but I could hardly tell my family and friends what I was doing. After a lot of self-reflection and late-night self-loathing, I had to face the reality and I told my parents and friends that I'd found a new job in TV production, sometimes I would work from home and intended to stay in Chicago but, I told them my work could take me to the southern states at any time, which would give me leeway to be undisturbed. I felt horrible but I was also protecting them from my reality. While I was personally OK with what I was doing, I couldn't imagine my parents being anything other than disgusted and ashamed.
I made up my mind, that for now, at least, this job was the right one for me.
- COMMENTS
dawg997about 1 year agoYou have an easy to read writing style. It's very easy to get into the story. You did a good job of Cara's character development, and likewise, little character development of her clients, which makes total sense.
It's like I as the reader am a fly on the wall, observing everything.
I look forward to the next chapter, and by all means, keep writing stories!
Will527over 1 year agoThis was fascinating! Those of us (men) who have been with escorts often wonder how they got into doing it in the first place, but it's really none of our business and we're there for sex not a history lesson. This tale is remarkable.
oldsage_1over 1 year agoJust found you when I ran out of material from my regulars. I like this story line and the presentation is smooth well paced and believable. Looking forward to reading the rest of what you have posted. You also have a new follower so I don't miss future offerings.
Its obvious you have talent. Keep writing it gets easier with practice and experience. Good ratings too and well deserved.
Cheers
SAGE
Maydaypilotover 1 year agoVery well written and intriguingly genuine. Looking forward to your series.
pk2curiousover 1 year agoI'm liking it . I like her . I like that she is so raw/new . Your grammar is fine . Well done .
Dark358over 1 year agoReally enjoyed reading this. Maybe, because of having worked in Hyde Park, I'm familiar with the area where the story takes place which makes it kinda relatable. Mostly, though, your writing style reads as a friend sharing. And if how you write reflects your personality, I like your upbeat honesty that bleeds through. The time you spend detailing what's going on between the ears makes this a really engaging read.
Uptown_Girlover 1 year agoAuthor@ Tryst - Thanks for your comments and I'm really glad you like the story. I will work on my paragraphs! This whole writing stories is new to me and I'm grateful for the constructive suggestions :)
trystover 1 year agoWell done! I appreciate your realism. The story seems sincere and entirely believable - more classic erotica than hardcore porn. I *really* liked the fact that you know and use proper grammar, and can spell. My only negative criticism would be that your paragraphs are too long (saith the grammar police). Thanks, and keep writing.
Anonymousover 1 year agoVery good first effort! Keep writing, please. Looking forward to more from the main character and how she manages to craft a social life independent of the profession.
