All Comments on 'A New Day'

by bupbupbup

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
MigbirdMigbirdabout 3 years ago
Sharing Thoughts

Thanks for sharing your thoughts of hot women and hope you continue to do so. Loved the banter and easily visualized Claire and Sarah at the coffee shop not to mention in bed - very hot. Actually felt like I got to know each over the course of a short story - nicely done and highly erotic.

jsmangisjsmangisabout 3 years ago

I really loved this story. You have a beautiful way of weaving eroticism and romance together. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Amoreena75Amoreena75about 3 years ago
Claire's New Day

I like this story a lot - very erotic. Loved the blend of romance and sex.

BillyslateBillyslateabout 3 years ago

Lovely!

Cute romantic and sexy banter, followed by red hot sex, always wins the Gold Medal🎉.

A 5*-Star Rated Short Story!

PixiehoffPixiehoff7 months ago

That was a delight - believable and likeable characters and a good build up to an explosive climax. 5 stars from me xxxxx

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userbupbupbup@bupbupbup
Just a girl who loves masturbating, love to chat with all other women! My stories are all fiction but I have had a lot of fun writing them and expressing myself through them. I am absolutely an open book so ask me anything!

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

A New Day Series Info