All Comments on 'A New Day'

would have given it a better score, but felt rushed at the end.

Very erotic, good story

I think you did a great job with character development, pacing and plot. I like your descriptive style when it comes to the sex. Looking forward to more from you! 5 stars.

My 2 cents

A beautiful story. I like it when 2 people find love and it is even better when they are brother and sister. 5/5 stars.

An absolutely fantastic story. Well done.

The build-up was well paced and the character development was excellent, however, I felt that the sex at the end was too short and could have used a little more detail. Now that they are living as a couple, it would be fun to explore that further, perhaps also meeting up with the couple from the cabin next door.

a real love story. well done!

Wow. First, this was a great story. Second, I've actually camped at Philmont High Adventure Scout Ranch, AND I've climbed Mt. Baldy. It wasn't just Boy Scouts, either; it was also Explorer Scouts and I have some wonderful memories myself.

Such a beautiful story - loved every word

This was a very well written story telling of the feelings for each other. Keep writing, you did a wonderful job of writing. Thank you

Just an average story. Nothing really erotic here.

The sex writing is horrible. The story itself is quite unremarkable.

Wonderful story. You captured the true nudist lifestyle experience. The sex scenes were fine...

Excellent balance. Warm, loving, sexy and realistic. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

beautiful warm and loving well told story