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Anonymous4 months ago

Don't let this stop. Great chapter 1. Keep them Cumming! The Bull needs to continue to service his herd. Let the breeding begin!!!

tallman441 4 months ago

Great start. You need to shorten her thoughts and add more conversation between the person she is talking with.

Frankie1952 4 months ago

Oh yes please may we have more.

Monagamous_Now 4 months ago

Wow!

Hope it is the start of a series.

Yes.

ArtieMax2 4 months ago

Use spell check

newporter56 4 months ago

Hope you do make it a series.

Anonymous4 months ago

We need pregnancies at least one. Someone had a baby by this horse cocked sibling son

Anonymous4 months ago

Great Story!

More Please!!!

MsBellarotica 4 months ago

OMG! NEED part two!

Anonymous4 months ago

Hoe stuff please carry on

Baldy11 4 months ago

Would enjoy more to this series on how the siblings started and where the family takes their new found love for each other!

bluerowdy 4 months ago

Great start, more chapters. I want to see how he dominates all three.

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...

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