All Comments on 'A New Job'

The ideas and scenes were great, well thought out and very hot, I would recommend that you "show the story, don't tell the story". Don't describe the characters, just let them be as they are and the descriptions will appear in the readers heads.

Terrific story ... who knew you were both sexy and so talented ... Good stuff Misty

the amount of detail is such that it paints a more clear image of the story than any HD program ever could. The other post "show it not tell it" has a point, and it was a short story, but there is so much potential for further entries along this line. I like how Master doesn't needlesly beat his slaves, but does it to show who is boss and makes sure they don't forget. Awsome Story!