All Comments on 'A New Job'

Sorry, but no. This did nothing for me whatsoever

Good & hot story. Wish I was Nick. Please do a few more chapters.

Does need to be proofread a couple more times, I saw a few spots with the wrong word. It’s still def readable but slows down the reading.

I liked it myself. I hope you write another one about another young man and Futa. Maybe he wouldn't be quite so submissive. A little force would be good. Anyway, don't be down hearted. Keep writing.

i loved it

Good story. Doesn't drag on too long on details and still provides enough for a setting that can be expanded on.

It has some grammatical errors, tho. A proofreader could polish the story.

One of the better stories I've found.

Not bad for a first story at all, wonderful job. Personally, spit roasting and bukkake aren’t really thing, so I hope if you continue to make stories, you try your hand at some romance centered ones with characters/relationships that have a little more depth.

the story is pretty good, but could you add a mind control tag or something similar since the futa cum had some affect on the new hire?

Damnnn! Its awesome!

Please continue writing more this story.

Would love to see all the futas hatching a plan to ditch their director, fire him and make him one of their sluts - thus taking over company. And enforcing some new company "politics". ;)

Loved the ganging upon Nick, lucky bastard! A few mis-applied words, but very readable

Pretty great, all things considered. My only gripe with the story is it had no epilogue. Would've been nice to see what Nick looked like a few years down the line. Like, for example, did Sandra finally claim him and made him move into her place? Or, how much smaller was his dick at that point? Stuff like that.

4/5.

Hot!!!!!

Loved this one only thing that would make it hotter would be forcing him and maybe feminizing him