by mikewhitaker
Good happy ending.
1 star by mistake.
I’ll log off and give the 5 it deserves.
It would take a few millions of dollars to buy 10,000 acres and set it up as you describe - way out of the reach of 99.99% of people.
Very well done. A pleasant change up from the cheating , gang bang reads of late. Finally a awesome story that is relatable. Good job
First of all trolls, this is an erotic literature website, where we expect things like fucking and sucking.
2nd, this is a work of fiction. How do you have the nerve to define the authors world they are describing?
3rd, when people go through tremendous stress the basic primitive instincts come to the surface.
I enjoyed this story, thanks for your submission
Poor man isn't even cold yet and wife and friend are fucking like animals. So much for a period of mourning the dead husband. Anonymous, fuck you. You pretentious piece of shit. This story sucks.
Nothing honors your dead husband more than getting the shit fucked out of you by his best friend and trying to make babies with him the very night of hubby death and smiling and giggling the whole time. This is toxic femininity at its finest.
Still, this was very well written and aside from the extensive doomsday prepper back patting very poetic in its verbiage.
I may not like Becky, but I like your writing skill very much.