All Comments on 'A New Life'

by mikewhitaker

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blksoldierblksoldieralmost 4 years ago

what a beautiful story well written,I enjoyed it a lot.

what4mewhat4mealmost 4 years ago
Great story

Good happy ending.

1 star by mistake.

I’ll log off and give the 5 it deserves.

SwordWielderSwordWielderalmost 4 years ago
Decent but unrealistic

It would take a few millions of dollars to buy 10,000 acres and set it up as you describe - way out of the reach of 99.99% of people.

mikeyjb51mikeyjb51almost 4 years ago

Very well done. A pleasant change up from the cheating , gang bang reads of late. Finally a awesome story that is relatable. Good job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Omg

First of all trolls, this is an erotic literature website, where we expect things like fucking and sucking.

2nd, this is a work of fiction. How do you have the nerve to define the authors world they are describing?

3rd, when people go through tremendous stress the basic primitive instincts come to the surface.

I enjoyed this story, thanks for your submission

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

Poor man isn't even cold yet and wife and friend are fucking like animals. So much for a period of mourning the dead husband. Anonymous, fuck you. You pretentious piece of shit. This story sucks.

eh9198eh9198almost 3 years ago

Nothing honors your dead husband more than getting the shit fucked out of you by his best friend and trying to make babies with him the very night of hubby death and smiling and giggling the whole time. This is toxic femininity at its finest.

Still, this was very well written and aside from the extensive doomsday prepper back patting very poetic in its verbiage.

I may not like Becky, but I like your writing skill very much.

CYOAWitchesCYOAWitchesalmost 3 years ago

Really well done. Thank you for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome story! Needs more chapters?!

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