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All Comments on 'A New Light is Created'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Hits you in the gut!

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tizwickytizwicky11 months ago

Feels like it's unfinished and incomplete.

BarryJames1952BarryJames195211 months ago

Very well done. Thank you for sharing your work.

ChopinesqueChopinesque11 months ago

For such a little short story, much impact.

chytownchytown11 months ago

***Thanks for the effort.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzar11 months ago

Okay. Not badly done, just not my cup of tea. Thank for the effort you put into the work.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is really something good. The difficult thing in 'first person' seems to me to make others, not just the narrator, real: this story does so.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Feel good reading.

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New story submitted for ON THE JOB 2023 in Romance. This one took me two years to finish. New meds seem to help. Still no cure, but there is hope for Alzheimer's treatment to slow down the disease.