All Comments on 'A New Man'

Every story of yours I've read, (and enjoyed) you use the wrong tense of 'saw' ---

"Our friends were worried it was too soon but when they seen (should be saw) us together and seen (saw) the love and passion we shared they understood."

Anonymous is right. You do write well and I usually enjoy your stories (this one was ok but not my cup of tea), but your improper use of ‘seen’ for ‘saw’ drives me nuts! And you’re not the only author on here that does it... do you write under another name as well? :)

Good story and a funny one.

Nope.

Your stories are inventive and engaging but you seriously need a good editor, although if English is not your first language, I congratulate you on a better job than I could manage in another tongue.