All Comments on 'A New Prescription Ch. 02'

Does he breed all 3 of the women

Hot!

I wonder if the sister is also going to take a pill? Great story!

Great chapter, looking forward to more

"I believe one or both of us are being seduced," Holly said, never once taking her eyes away from Parvati.

"What do we do?" he asked.

God I love your writing. XD For all its lasciviousness, this is one of the most -wholesome- stories of its kind I've read. The save-the-species subplot is a bit of a left-fielder, but if it means a world of Happy Sex, I'll gladly suspend my disbelief.

So, so sexy. I and my cock greatly enjoyed it. Thank you for the amazing work :D

Wonderful story can't wait for the next chapter 😃

Enjoying your story a great deal! Please keep writing!

A couple of notes - when you introduce a trope like a drug to make humanity breed to save the species from a precipitous population drop, you need to develop it a bit more, since this is, in reality, very much *not* the case. To preserve the suspension of disbelief, the elements that conflict with reality must be explained in the story. Otherwise, the conflict takes the reader out of the story. Also, while "grinded" is technically an acceptable past tense of the word "grind," a better, more natural-sounding version is "ground," as in "She ground her pelvis against his." The unusual past tense can, again, pop the reader out of the story to consider the word choice. Just a couple of suggestions I hope are helpful!

hope will get the sister too.. 5/5

Pls don't bring other guys into the harem .

Continue

Keep this going and going. Fun read, not much as far as hangups. They're usually prevalent in stories like this, but you cut through the crap

I'm loving the story thus far, but I'm my honest opinion, the scenes are a "little light on the lesbian portions of a threesome activity. Plus the dirty talk could also be stepped up. But I will also concede that THIS IS YOUR STORY, and I am thoroughly enjoying it. I have and would again give it a five star rating, but I only think in the context of the story it "powers down the affect of the Holly/Mom character. While the son is plowing away all the female supporting characters, mom's action in the scenes is more for voyeur, than an active participant. This is just one person's opinion. So take this one with a tiny gain of salt.

P.S. I am still a fan.