All Comments on 'A New Roommate'

***Thanks for the read.

Premise with possibilities.

But feh!

Not worth the read.

Two stars.

I was interested until I read the tags. To start with 40 is not mature, it's mid-life at best. Second, this story has been done so many times that it seems to have no originality. Anal, blowjob, riding. Those things can be found in nearly every story on Lit. I agree with anon before me. It was 'meh' at best. Better luck next time.

Enjoyed the story. Has possibilities and I hope you add chapters

That worked out okay for him!

4

You used the name Keith 75 times, and Samantha 75 times. It became so unreadable I couldn’t finish it. Pronouns are a writer’s friend.

Sorry but...

I'm usually quite laid back with this sites stories but all I remember from reading 4.5 paragraphs is:

Samantha Keith Samantha Keith Samantha Keith Samantha Keith Samantha Keith we were sitting beside each other and did things to each other.

It's very rare I give up so quickly.

There are some negative comments here, and I agree with some... but obviously, BassPlayerGuy did something well... 14,000 and more views in just a few days, and this is his only story posted!

Well done BassPlayerGuy!

I enjoyed your story, with a good lead up. I like it because there’s so much room to move for future interactions and extending on the story. A good start. Thank you for the story.

Late 30s isn’t and shouldn’t be considered “mature” or “older” yet. It’s not even middle aged. She’s close, but still not there yet. She’s in MILF territory although she isn’t a mom. Women in their 30s are still in their peak and don’t have wrinkles or sagging yet (at least not in my experience) those start happening around mid40s. This all-too-common mistake just sticks in my craw, sorry. Other than that, this story has potential.