All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Ch. 05'

O conto está cada vez melhor!

Gwen's transformation is coming along nicely. And with so many chapters to go, I can only imagine how much she will evolve ;->

I love stories about mature, prudish women who find their inner slut. This story is well written and nicely detailed. I love how Natalie is leading Gwen down the path to "slutsville." Like Tim, I would be turned on if my woman "accidentally" exposed herself publicly.

I had read the first story a couple of months ago and it didn't grab me at the time. Just the other day I reread it and then read part 2. Suddenly I was addicted. I started reading and became fascinated with the story. Very well written and entertaining. Especially love the relationship that grows between Gwen and Natalie. I think these stories personify what 95% of married men wish would happen to their wives. I've read the first ten and will continue to read the rest. Great work. Please keep it up.

A great erotic story look foward to reading them all....

Very, very, HOT!

you are giving me and my wife new ideas

Your style is very erotic and such a turn on. The character development is very good even in this short story format. Please keep writing. Your writing is really a pleasure to read!

Fantastic read. Please don't leave it so long before the next chapter.