by BusyBadger
Up to the usual high standard. At the start I was worried that the changing room scene was too repetitive of the plot from earlier episodes, but by the end you'd blown me away. Again.
I just love following Gwen's battle between prude and libertine... it's all so believably written. The plot devices of 'the lady' and 'the slut' are a stroke of genius in allowing you to illustrate Gwen's internal conflicts.
Five stars again!
I'm completely hooked on the (forgive the pun) expansion of Gwen. Such a wonderful journey, filled with so many little adventures, and with the promise of so many more...
BusyB
WOW YOU ARE AMAZING
What she would not admit, what the Slut on her shoulder did not dare even suggest, was that she craved some excitement. Perhaps if the conditions were right, she might be in a position to give someone a peek of her underwear, or perhaps her bare back. All without them knowing she was doing it, of course; it would have to be a believable accident on her part.
Particularly when I have stories of my own that need finished!
But I am hooked! Really enjoying Gwen's transformation.
I just have to see where this goes! ;->