All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 02 Ch. 10'

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karvickkarvickalmost 9 years ago

Amazing story. Please ignore any nay sayers and go where ever you want with this. It's your story and you are doing an awesome job telling it. Gwen's exhibitionism and the progression of her sexuality feel very natural. The dreams and internal conflict make for a great build up. Hopefully this will have an equally great pay off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Thanks

What a great job you are doing with this story.

singleotsingleotalmost 9 years ago
Loved it

Wow, your on a roll, this one came out fast. Hope that means your full of ideas just waiting to be written. Keep up the great story, we'll keep reading. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Never let down

My favorite story line. First story I look for when I log on. So many possibilities. Keep up the good work. You always get five stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Keep it coming

I love this story both parts and can't wait for the next chapter.

mabell3368mabell3368almost 9 years ago
Great characters

Are what keep me coming back for more. I find myself wanting to see how far Gwen will go in her new-found liberation. I like her more and more with each additional chapter. This is by far my favorite serial story on this site. Keep it going, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Two in One Month

Yes!! Two in one month. Fantastic as always. Gwen is truly a Goddess!!

As usual, can't wait for the next one. :)

Advice_GirlAdvice_Girlalmost 9 years ago
Great chapter

I love the way that Gwen and Tim are moving ahead in this adventure. Very good writing.

AG

WoodsLord_3540WoodsLord_3540almost 9 years ago
HOORAY!!!

At last, the long awaited facial...

Gwen's reaction was exquisite, love her laughing reaction. Your description was wonderful. Love to know just what is going through Tim's mind.

More please.

ptcruzxxptcruzxxover 8 years ago
Very Good

When I want some enjoyment reading, your stories always do it. Thanks

BigBeanieBigBeanieover 8 years ago
I absolutely adore this series.

Another wonderful instalment. So sexy, so believable.

StubbyoneStubbyone5 months ago

Well done. I loved this chapter. It’s hard to believe that you are still able to maintain the same level of excitement and sensual buildup for each episode. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s and a favorite!

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3/23/19 For all those wondering, yes there is more to come. Real-life has been very busy and finding time to write has been difficult. Gwen and Tim (and Natalie, and Cricket et al) will continue! We are a married couple who, while monogamous ourselves, believe that humans are...