All Comments on 'A New York Haunting: Pt. 01'

I really enjoyed this first submission! The writing is great and helps set the scene by both its style and historical details. I'm looking forward to learning more about this mysterious young woman.

A sexy nerd doctor from Scandi

With scalpel and sutures so handy

Was assigned a new duty ---

To tail a young beauty

And the glimpse up her skirt made him randy.

very well written i am hooked

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The medical journal in the story is called 'Boston' on some pages, and 'New England' on others. I overlooked the mistake because the story's interesting. Anyway,good story (so far).

Thanks for reading. Actually, two different journals are meant to be referenced. The appendix study during his 2nd year of med school was submitted to "New England..."; the article they're currently working on about blood vessel suturing will be submitted to "Boston..."

This in some regards reminds me of the recent TV serial Vienna Blood. The same format is used a young Austrian doctor wanting to explore being a Psychoanalyst in Vienna 1899 is shadowing a Police Detective for a month to give insight into the minds of criminals using the new science of Freud etc.

I like this story it is innovative, imaginative and a damned good read. Keep it up.

5/5

What a wonderful period mystery with a touch of drama. The author has captured the period brilliantly, the attention to detail is nothing short of amazing. The research into the period even down to details regards clothing is mind boggling. The development of the characters just excellent.

I am hooked!

This sort of stuff always grabs me.

Thus far a resounding 5/5 and l look forward to more chapters as they come.

5/5

Surprisingly solid medical facts !

So I've read the complete work and I look forward to more works by you set in different eras and time periods. The Old west, the colonial era, the middle ages, the Roman empire, Alexanders conquests, the stone age, the age of exploration i could go on.