All Comments on 'A New York Haunting: Pt. 05'

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Anonymousover 1 year ago

Of professional ethics he did boast

Till the doc saw the girl with the ghost

With the view of her holes

He lost sight of his goals

And his cock swelled as stiff as a post

kiwiplum over 1 year ago

Really enjoying this tale, and the clever limericks :)

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Okay, this has now gone to absurdity and completely irrational story telling. You lost me as the reader. This is beyond fictional to not even believable.

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