by roblondon2
RobLondon2, that if this story continues to tell itself with the intelligence, verve, and light tone that you've exhibited so far, you will soon achieve the rank of super Lit writer! A Great Job! Love the story!
Glad to read ch 2, and looking forward to additional chapters. Brings back memories of somethings slightly similar, Thank you.
The ending surprised me. I wasn't expecting that, though I have suspected he would ask her to do more than have sex with him. But where he suggested she could sleep was a surprise.
Why make her sleep on the couch? And how tired can a 19 year old get after just one fuck? He should have taken her to bed. There was always the possibility of getting aroused in the middle of the night for another fuck session. Then there's morning wood to be taken care of. Also he should not have accepted any of her conditions. After all how could he keep away from her fantastic ass?