- Incest/Taboo
- A Nice Hot Bath
- Comments
All Comments on 'A Nice Hot Bath'
by MattSBates
- 13 Comments
Anonymousabout 2 years agoUndoubtedly a fantasy of every young man that has lived with near-aged sister(s). We all hoped, especially for an outcome as presented; while few were rewarded.
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Anonymousabout 2 years agoOnly reason I just gave 4 stars is that I want more. This was a great start, I'm just like your hero, I love waatching women masturbate. Thanks for this, and I hope you will write more.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI gave it 5 stars, I see it's just new, so maybe a next chapter ? I'm looking forward to it....
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI hope you continue this. Many of us have jerked off in the tub or shower and have fond memories of shooting our seed into bath water or against the shower wall and then wiping our spend off so others did not find it. Enjoy every time you jerk off, because prostate cancer can make it less pleasurable.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGood premise.
Nicely told.
But too short.
Could have used more details. More dialog about masturbating. About what he was imagining while he masturbated. How often he masturbated. What was it that made him cum?
Why nothing with her breasts? Why wouldn't he ask to see them while he was masturbating? What did they look like? What were the nipples like? Did she play with them for him? Did she tell him how warm they were? How firm they were? How soft they were? How sensitive they were? Had he ever seen live breasts before? Could he imagine rouching them himself? etc.
Nevertheless, five stars for potential.
Anonymousover 1 year agocould be a true story, i know as i've been caught by my sister while jerking one off in the bath, the only differance was she stripped off to finger her pussy and she tweeked her tits an nipples.
Anonymousover 1 year agoNice story, quite believable. Every teenaged guy's fantasy that has a sister their same age. I hope there's going to be a chapter 2.
