All Comments on 'A Nice Place to Live'

Scary story, well done; likely to lead to nightmares.

How to even think about moving to a new neighborhood, making new friends - if You don't have CIA super skills to verify and remedy?

I was going to say quick and dirty but I'm thinking - quick and scary - would better describe it. Would have liked them to have tried to track down the earlier victims and maybe rescued them that had survived.

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Cheers

A beautiful day in the neighborhood!

I don't know what you have planned for Bill and Jackie, but they're a fun couple. Maybe a continuing series of the Williams's neighborhood clean-up? Just a thought.

Blew it right at the beginning... "I have a think 9-inch cock". Really? You need a good editor/proofreader, otherwise not worth reading.

This storybwasbWAY TOO SHORT! The premise of the story is nice and I believe that if you would have spread it of a couple of chapters, or even better a whole novel or novella, you could have well developed characters and a fascinating story. There is a lot of potential for a fantastic dark fantasy story, and hopefully you can revisit for an extensive re-write. B7t stories l8ke these are right up my alley. Please keep writing and best of luck in all you do.

Thanks for sharing your story.