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Wash2015Wash2015about 2 years ago

I liked the premise. The guy was a dick though and the dialogue felt off like there were missing words or parts.

HS98HS98about 2 years agoAuthor

@Wash2015

True, I actually seriously thought about rewriting the dialogue to make him seem like less of a douche. Ultimately, though, I decided to keep it as it was, since at least to me, it mostly made sense for him to act like that given his position, being a rich douche who's used to getting whatever he needs from people, and treating them as objects of his pleasure.

Dunno about the dialogue in itself being off though, and I'm sorry that you felt like that reading this story.

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Current status of my works: - I'm not focusing on English-language works so much right now, instead writing mostly stories in my native language, since the local erotica scene here really needs all the shots in the arm it can get. I might post those stories here in the other ...