All Comments on 'A Nicer Breed of Vampire Ch. 02'

Everything was fine until she mutilated his "little brother".

How can it still be used when leaking blood?

As the vampire stories/myths go, when a vampire licks the wound then their saliva heals the bite so no leakage…at least not from the bite.

Excellent story and a very interesting family.

J.D.

I;ll have to review ' little brother' as I didn't remember it! There are errors from the reviewer

also that I need to address i.e. the ending isn't on my submission. Should be fun- thanks for the comment

jack

[28.08.22]

Sexcellent Duology!

11/10 Bags o' Blood!!!!!