All Comments on 'A Night after the Casino'

I liked the long lead up to her apartment, the extended foreplay, the lengthy fuck scene(s), and the clean ending (ha). I almost forgot, your paragraphs are way to long making it more difficult to read. There are no rules on paragraph length, but it's better for the reader to have short one: six sentences max. You're readers will love you more.

Just no love anywhere.....

This is a very nice romance story, full of love and passion.

I kept thinking that the wife's friend would have balls