All Comments on 'A Night at the Lake House'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What a wanker

He should have just pushed is cock in her as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 5 years ago
Mesmerizing.

Such a great story of a dream come true and hopefully more.

swfb70swfb70over 5 years ago
had a somewhat similar

experience with my wife's oldest sister-one of these days I will figure out how to put it in a story

HawkEye1969HawkEye1969over 5 years ago
Good Read

To the anonymous person have you never of a build up in a story? I thought it was a good start to something wonderful between the siblings. I hope this is not a one and done, it could keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow!!!!!!

Can't wait for ch 2

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 5 years ago
Not bad

You have a good story started hope to see chapter 2 soon. Thanks for the story

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
great start

i really enjoy a good, long tease. this is a good one. hopefully you have more to come - and soon.

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Oh yeah

Oh hell yeah! Please continue, and I hope it gets to a threesome with his wife. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Now this has potential

Good start. Looking forward for more. Please no Jenn or Andy threesomes.

Islandchef52Islandchef52over 5 years ago

Don't stop now. Great story.

Chas1051Chas1051over 5 years ago
Continue

Chapter 2 please.

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
AWESOME START

5 STARS WHEN YOU FUCK

Please make up for missed youth

Both love the pleasure

Finish the fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot!

Very similar to how things are with my sister. So hot. Please write more.

WildcatF4F1941WildcatF4F1941over 5 years ago
Enjoy Older Sibling Stories

Five Stars - greatly enjoyed this story and look forward to the continued sage of this pair.

Robinius1Robinius1over 5 years ago
Good, But???

If this was a one-off you have a terrible sense of how to end a story. It was really pretty good, well-written for the most part. I was expecting more than a jerk-off story - and the sister didn't even participate in that! With no hint of more to come this one's worth ZERO stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
potential

this story has a lot

WhO2WhO2over 5 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2...

...coming soon

WhO2WhO2over 5 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2...

was submitted a few minutes ago. Hope it is published soon.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
WOW

i read this because i saw chapter 2, and thought i should read this first. Wow - great tease, great storyline. looking forward to chapter 2

YoungFarmGirlYoungFarmGirlalmost 2 years ago

I loved it and laid back on the bed imagining his sister playing with herself after he had spilt his cum all over his tummy. I wonder if he helped her......I hope so.

HoldYouDownHoldYouDownover 1 year ago

Wonderful story, tender yet sexually charged. You have a breezy prose, the story moves along nicely. Going to read Chapter Two now.

nassauguy_2001nassauguy_2001about 1 year ago

Great story, really enjoyed it due to a sister fantasy (OK maybe a quick 69 when we were late 1990's)

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