All Comments on 'A Night at the Lake House'

Great story, really enjoyed it due to a sister fantasy (OK maybe a quick 69 when we were late 1990's)

Wonderful story, tender yet sexually charged. You have a breezy prose, the story moves along nicely. Going to read Chapter Two now.

I loved it and laid back on the bed imagining his sister playing with herself after he had spilt his cum all over his tummy. I wonder if he helped her......I hope so.

i read this because i saw chapter 2, and thought i should read this first. Wow - great tease, great storyline. looking forward to chapter 2

was submitted a few minutes ago. Hope it is published soon.

...coming soon

this story has a lot

If this was a one-off you have a terrible sense of how to end a story. It was really pretty good, well-written for the most part. I was expecting more than a jerk-off story - and the sister didn't even participate in that! With no hint of more to come this one's worth ZERO stars.

Five Stars - greatly enjoyed this story and look forward to the continued sage of this pair.

Very similar to how things are with my sister. So hot. Please write more.

5 STARS WHEN YOU FUCK

Please make up for missed youth

Both love the pleasure

Finish the fantasy

Chapter 2 please.

Don't stop now. Great story.

Good start. Looking forward for more. Please no Jenn or Andy threesomes.

Oh hell yeah! Please continue, and I hope it gets to a threesome with his wife. Five stars!

i really enjoy a good, long tease. this is a good one. hopefully you have more to come - and soon.

You have a good story started hope to see chapter 2 soon. Thanks for the story

Can't wait for ch 2

To the anonymous person have you never of a build up in a story? I thought it was a good start to something wonderful between the siblings. I hope this is not a one and done, it could keep going.

experience with my wife's oldest sister-one of these days I will figure out how to put it in a story

Such a great story of a dream come true and hopefully more.

He should have just pushed is cock in her as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies