All Comments on 'A Night in New York'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great first story

SaraSeraSaraSera8 months ago

Absolutely fantastic outing.

CharletteCharlette8 months ago

Rather average story but good attempt.

The writer needs to either do a better job of editing or find an editor to do it for them.

It was all kind of rushed but if you are rubbing one out that plays well for you.

Author, at least you got it posted !

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