All Comments on 'A Night in the Park'

by Twisted_Mistress

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Wise_ManWise_Manalmost 17 years ago
Loved it

Hope to read more from you, mayb about how she became his slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
squirt squirt damn that was hot

Both disgusting and arousing. Nicely written.

Blue_shoes1980Blue_shoes1980over 16 years ago
OMG!

What a nasty, degrading, twisted story you have written here... and how wet it made me! So wet, in fact, that I had to leave my panties in the restroom of the cafe I was reading at, and drive home with my thighs soaked...

...and for that, I must give thanks! *wink*

~"Fuck Toy" Tori

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
excellent

I thought it was a great story. I hope to read more in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great stuff

loved it, so damn good, coulda done with more screaming and dialogue but nevertheless, great stuff

WANNABENUDEWANNABENUDEalmost 14 years ago
VERY HOT

Almost makes me wish I was a homeless man too!! Great story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Gross

This is just plain gross.

honeydew4uhoneydew4uover 12 years ago
Wonderfully arousing

Great story. It made me so wet!

Look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great story, keep it up

CindykayCindykayover 9 years ago
Wonderfully erotic!

I have found that many men enjoy the thought of degrading thier wives sexually! Early in my marriage my own husband had done this to me, in later life I have returned the "favor" and have sexually decimated him....

billie babkabillie babkaalmost 7 years ago
i'd be scared to death, but..............

God, i'd love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just imagine how amazing and humiliating that would feel! Absolutely brilliant piece

Kittykait66Kittykait66over 1 year ago

Loved this story I should try if I want a scarred lol

Wendywants2BtakenWendywants2Btakenover 1 year ago

PLEASE!! Someone contact me and setup this scenario, I’ll be there ready and willing❤️❤️❤️

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