All Comments on 'A Night To Remember...'

The best swinging story in a long time. Leaves you erect!

WOW! Now that is a hot story. Well written, felt like I was there.Only wish the wife and I could repeat your fun. Keep up the good writings and hope you and the wife continue to have fun.

Damn, that was HOT! Keep up the good times and good writing!

What a hot story!!! I wish my wife would swallow a friends cum like that!

There a lot going for this - but please, please get an editor. you could turn something that is mediocre into a good story.

Sorry I hate being critical about someone trying their best and being far better than I could dream off. But I was turned off in the first paragraph, yet another literotica with a miss world contestant as the wife, do the authors not realise a story needn't have fantastic looking women to have a hot story, I amongst many other readers like to imagine the plot happening to us, that's part of the sexiness.

Then we had a couple walk through the friends door and ask for a demonstration blow job for them to WATCH, half way through they lose interest and start playing themselves, then the other couple lose interest in their blow job and stop, that's when I lost interest, sorry.