All Comments on 'A Night with the Cross Country Capt'

Loved the idea behind this story. However I do think it was a bit protracted. Both should have cum sooner, and at least twice more from all of the foreplay. But what do I know, just a poor boy that wishes he could have been a part of this scenario. Good work, look forward to more. Cheers.

You're a great writer & these are really fun characters! Would love to see how they develop over the summer together. Keep writing!

This was so hot - I came twice all over myself!

It felt like I could taste the growing chemistry between these two... I’d love to see where it goes during their summer vacation. Please write more

Thank you so much for your feedback Rob! When I originally wrote this story, I liked to imagine the person reading it edging alongside Dylan in the story, so I wanted to draw out our final blow :P hope you enjoyed yourself and looking forward to sharing more!

Great story and idea! I liked that Brett wasn’t just using Dylan for his own pleasure but making sure he got off as well #fxckSarah

would love to hear about their summer...

I’m edging to this, reading bottom of page two and all of three, over and over, my god, what a story!