All Comments on 'A Noble Sacrifice'

by DictionDoctor

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

nice beginning to the story.... i want more..continue on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
NonConsent/Reluctance?

Seemed that Cherry was pretty obliging, she would have begged even without him telling her! But I couldn't care less whether the category fits the story, I enjoyed this one a lot! Definitely my kind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

Put more... More to this story!! I really really enjoyed reading it!! It made me feel... Like... Like... I don't know is just hard to describe the feeling.. But is a great story so far and I what MORE of it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Mmm.... Loved the story it made me wet !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HOT

Wow! That was super super hot!! Please continue this story! I must read more!! you made me so wet!

DictionDoctorDictionDoctoralmost 13 years agoAuthor
part 2

I have added part 2 to the story.

- Fredrick E. Griffory

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Non-consent???

I get that she was kidnapped, but this character was definitely willing.

TheStarsAtNightTheStarsAtNightover 12 years ago

Not bad, but it would be a lot better with some editing.

SassyKatz71SassyKatz71over 8 years ago
Mmmmm...Nice one

I thought it was a really good story. She doesn't seem to be too reluctant lol but I loved it anyway. So hot !

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