All Comments on 'A Not So Ordinary Day'

For all of those who love older women and who harbor fantasies of having a mother-in-law-I'd-love-to-fuck and a mother-in-law who fulfills those fantasies, I am looking forward to the next installment. The question beckons, is this fantasy and fiction, or....

That was so hot I cantwait for the next chapter hurry!!!

Fantastic. Will be waiting patiently for the next chapter

Nice story hope you continue on with it.

Ditto on all the above. Continue this one for sure!

Very hot; good story line but please get someone to edit it.

I agree with the comments about an editor, but I have to say this is the hottest story I have read in some time. I stayed hard the whole time, once it got to Donna showing up. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter, maybe some group sex with mother and daughter???

Next chapter now.

First off you're not texting your mates so using "thru" and "tonite" just makes you look like a moron. It's a story; write properly. Secondly "im" has an apostrophe as it's a contraction of "I am". Thirdly why would he go out to collect a take-away after worrying about his wife and mother-in-law getting caught in the snow? Very bad plot device! Lastly the predictable ending. Gimme a break.

So, like I said, other than those things mentioned not a bad little story (oh and call them stockings instead of "hose").

That was great, and the ending came out of nowhere! Can't wait for part 2!

But you need an editor to clean it up and also take away the superfluous stuff that doesn't need to be there.

A little bit predictable....the twist at the end was good, but I think if that was the case, things should have played out better and avoid the sence of cheating on his wife.

Thanks all the same, was a good read. 😊🙏🙏😊

Could be a rather good story if you'd just get yourself an editor/proof reader and get rid of all the superfluous words. Keep trying . . . .