All Comments on 'A NudeWwalk for Caity'

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
I enjoyed that ...

... but a typo in your title?! That takes a bit of wriggling out of - and has cost you a star! Do proof-read carefully before your submit anything! A nice story, all the same - thank you.

camperguy123camperguy123almost 10 years ago
Ojd people rule

Just like the old saying that old age and trickery will over come youth and foolishness every time.

Debtor42Debtor42almost 10 years agoAuthor
For pedants and typing errors

The second game played in the story, was indeed "the man's version" and bared no reference to the first game. It was adapted by him, to be a more difficult game with ANY question allowed to be asked, thus increasing the chances of a person undressing!

For the record:- I'm familiar with how the game is normally played! I trust that satisfies the pedants out there?

I also made a typo with the title, as I almost lost the will to post it, having to re-edit it for the fourth time, and I temporarily lost focus.

My heart sunk when I saw what I'd done! I'm annoyed at myself for that.

Hopefully, you just read it as a fictional stripping story? That was all it was ever supposed to be! Nothing more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Smug sister taken down a peg or two

Loved the unfairness of the story for poor Caity, the desperation in trying to get everyone else naked was great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love the humiliation

A funny story with a nice twist in the tail.

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