All Comments on 'A Nudge to the Gray Matter Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
request

I don't know if you take requests or not, but I would like it if the next one had the danger of getting someone pregnant, or better yet the person WANTING to get knocked up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
NICE!

Can I have that program/movie? :P

thakersjaythakersjayabout 12 years ago
Great

Loved it.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
condom

Im hoping he knocked up Carol. Some pregnant sex and alot of tit milk would be nice

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
this is the story you use when explaining Literotica

Raunchy, sexy, and over the top

thebug37thebug37about 8 years ago
Hints

great five star production - just like Hollywood.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Not bad, well written just short. Try to make your stories last longer than 2 pages.

Anony Mous

tsgtcapttsgtcapt6 months ago

Could be fun, sexy, and more... thank you.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a3 months ago

Good opening to a series. As an avid reader of mutually consensual incestuous love stories, I like indepth character development and logically constructed story plot/subplots. Finally, I like the author's use of the English language. Gutter slang is used ony when and where appropriate.

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