All Comments on 'A One-Way Conversation'

OK, since you asked for good or bad opinions. I'm all for writers trying out different styles, but I didn't care for this. The missing second character made it feel like something was lacking in the story itself. I've read and liked your other stories, but this one just didn't do it for me. Sorry, but you did ask.

It was interesting. Kinda unique but felt a bit incomplete. Prefer a traditional style better as it develops both characters rather than just one. Nice job though.

Nice writing, different. The first part read like me and a buddy at the mall, I gave him my first blowjob. The second part read like a manager at my summer job talking me into bending over for him. I liked the story as a one way conversation.

Thank you guys for your responses. and yes, I did ask :) I sometimes try different approaches to my story-telling: some work and some don't. I guess this one doesn't work that much. Again thanks. Simon