All Comments on 'A Paladin's Journey Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

You're a genius. Loved the sex and the story development! Keep up the good work :)

wicked62wicked62over 2 years ago

I don't think the new language is working. It's confusing an otherwise brilliant story. Even the Paladins are now some wierd elvish name.. Disappointing.

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4th December 2023: Hi everyone! I'm hoping this update finds you healthy and exuberant :) I just submitted APW 14 for publication, so keep an eye out for it! - Anti. --------------------------------------------------------------- 11th August 2023: I thought I should check i...

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