by Antidarius
Anti, you've been producing great chapters for this story so far! Each one seems to flow better and better as you go. All the while you're managing to keep a good balance of plot progression and intimacy as well as maintaining and building characters without getting too sucked into one to the point of neglecting any other. I think you've found your balance and are putting out some excellent work here. I can't wait to see where you take this!
I love your stories.... I just wish they were longer and more frequent.... thanks for a great read, cant wait for the next chapter.
This is the best series I've read here. I'm happy to continue reading as long as you continue writing.