All Comments on 'A Paladin's War Ch. 08'

Thank you for an other riveting chapter of you saga, really looking forward to the next instalment , your work is as excellent as always, thx for sharing it with us.

After Aran gets access to his vala back he senses Alana to the east, but shouldn't it be too the west? Aran went ready in the beginning and now he's coming back west. And to the north and east there is only the desert. It'd make sense if Alana was felt towards the west.

Is there a map of your world? You describe it really well, I almost can see it in my eyes. But it'd be great if I could see the map too, to set different actors at their correct place.

I had come across this story a few years back when there were only 3 or 4 chapters posted. Forgot about it later as many stories are left incomplete on this website. But when I found this author again a week ago I was surprised after reading the 1st chapter that I'd read this once and its been continued all this time. Took me a week but I've read every chapter with complete attention. You sir have a gift. Such a fine blend of intrigue, sex and fantasy is hard to come by.

My 2 cents

Another interesting chapter. I have read all the chapters in your books here and am impressed with your talent. I have read many stories on this site and this is one that ranks right at the top. You have such an imagination and ability. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for your time and imagination.

thank you what a chapter