All Comments on 'A Pale Court in Beauty and Decay'

I really love Maddie and Archive; they are intriguingly unique characters, defying the usual tropes found in your average Lit story.

Though, um, I may seem quite thick as I ask this but...what exactly is a Lit story?

Are you referring to Literotica stories overall, or is this some specific genre?

The story is in Sci-fi and Fantasy, which it fits QUITE WELL.

This is better than anything I was expecting. I don't usually read longer Literotica stories, but this was so unique that I had to.

Very well written with well fleshed out characters and a great plot. Plus the added bonus of a love story, what fun! It was hysterical! Please keep writing!

Fun! Love the lighthearted tone and teasing sexuality of your heroes, nice addition to your other stories. Thank you.

You mentioned this was a sequel. To which story?

Will we hear from Xander and Maddie again?

I like their adventures and troubles.

I enjoy your writing.