All Comments on 'A Para-fable (Complete Version)'

Splendid story!

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You are an artist who paints with words, as always. Loved it! 5 stars...

A wonderful story, as always.

Beautifully done Maya!

Thank you ♡ I hope and pray that 2021 will be a trouble-free year for you all.

Lovely praise to friendship - about strangers that we met can be the light on our tracks that often are changed by coincidence - for the selfish to a very unintended outcome.

Thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed reading the story, even if sometimes some of the names were hard to keep straight. Thankfully as the story progressed it became easier. Seems everyone got their just rewards, I like those kind of endings.

Your poems and short stories are always amazing, and this was no less so. :)