All Comments on 'A Penny for Your Thoughts Ch. 01'

I'll skip the rest, not well written, I don't care.

First, what was interracial about that? The whipping between past and present tenses was distracting, and the general writing, while okay, could have been better.<p>I was left not really caring about the rest. I may hang in for chapter two, but I may skip the rest.<p>Get an editor, please.