by sociopathic
Pace has become way too slow for me to continue. Not into endless teasing, you should think about moving this to fetish. No sex after 3 chapters = fetish story.
Great story. Horny passion. Achieved the grail of erotic kink that is a good turn-on.
Parts were slow. On over a half a page talking about morning wood and more waste talking about jerking off his morning wood near his room mate.
LIked the story bur mom said he taste like like pussy like pussy is he havinf sex withothers and she knows????? Does she finally have sex with her son?? you need to finish this story gave it a 4!!!!!!!!!!!
Three Chapters; Eight pages. Condense to about 2 chapters; 6 pages. Check out comments by Muskyboy and Redlion75. I think they are no correct path. Not sure about son. Mom sure, she will suck off anybody. Keep working.
Almost too much buildup here, so they need to be fucking like rabbits in the next chapter. Gave you a 4.
Fuck... You HAVE to write more mother/son stories kike this, with cock and cum obsession... The way you described her body responses was one of the hottest things I've ever read. Definitely 5, please keep it up!
Liked the story but still no incest with his mother but you need to continue until there's sex with his mother 4 stars