by optimizer888
I normally do not bother with really long stories,but this one, I just couldn't stop reading. I wasn't so pleased with the ending, but I knew from the onset that that would be the result.
Great read. Very imaginative and good writing.
If the ending hadn't been so painfully sad, I would have absolutely loved this story...as it is, it was super hot, and I wasn't sure if that made me a lesbian, or just a weird straight woman who kind of liked the idea of a guy with a pussy...maybe that makes me a feminist? I don't know. But the story was hot, hot, hot!
This really was a wonderful story - a few technical issues but overall enthralling characterization. I loved the Steve/Stephanie dichotomy and the attention to feminine emotional subtlety. Despite my inner romantic, I don't think it could have ended any other way. Bravo :)
I did enjoy this story but found it way too long to read in one sitting. Good job.
your story was so good! you're an excellent writer :) i look forward to more of your work!