All Comments on 'A Perfect Peach Pussy'

Excellent, excellent, excellent!!! Please write more.

I read this in the new format and I like it. I can imagine rock climbing would keep both of them in fantastic shape. Thanks for having Travis stop the first scene, it DID seem rushed and waiting upped the "Romance" factor.

Congratulations on your first story. Good tale and good first effort. I didn't particularly care for the title since it tended to detract from Sophie as a character since Travis seemed to be seeing her like that rather than as a beautiful young woman with such a blessing. Fortunately, Travis' actions overcame that in the story. Also, I agree with FormerReader's comment about rushing. That was a good tease for what was to come but showed that both members of the couple were more interested in what could be rather than what could be just at that particular instant. When it happens (still extremely quick, just later that day), it was cute and fun, though the ILYs during their play seemed rushed once again. A lot can happen before the first date so maybe they were to that point but that made it less believable.

A terrific story! Well done! I especially appreciated your details on the clothing.

This is a glorious love story, a joy to read. It needs a sequel.

I absolutely loved it, so well written and so descriptive, I wish that I could write half as well.