All Comments on 'A Personal Moment to Share with You Pt. 08'

I think you should read the other stories, and get the feel of these two woman. They are going to be true lesbian woman, who enjoy each other, have there terrible times, and eventually grow together to marry each other. Try and give it a change, please.

Obviously English isn't your primary language. Please work with an editor and someone who can give you insight about your topic.

What wrote after attempting to read part 7. Really would like to enjoy ALL 8 parts. I'm certain that this is a worthy read if only I could get past the abundance of errors.