All Comments on 'A Phone Call Can Change a Lifetime Pt. 01'

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ud1234ud1234about 1 year ago

Good story line. A great opening story to what can be multi chapters. Remember don't try to write a novel, just a good story. I also have stories on this site under ud1234. I write only real life. I think you have agood pace and well worded story. watch out for trolls. They abound here.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 1 year ago

Great start! I hope this is part 1 of many!

LookoldbutfeelyoungerLookoldbutfeelyoungerabout 1 year ago

Loving this story so far! Looking forward to how it progresses! 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story. more please.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 1 year ago

More please and soon. so hot n sexy so far. Eager to know where this goes and what the consequences will be. Well done for your first story. Thank you

KittyLover80KittyLover80about 1 year ago

Very enjoyable & hot story. Enjoyed reading it. Additional chapters would be welcomed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it!! Now you need to finish it with mother and son making love and then him beating the shit out of his worthless dad!!! You can't leave us hanging like this! And when is the incest going to start????????? Gave it 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cool moms like Mia lke to tease son and friends. It is fun and many good things may happen

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Liked the story 4 stars and waiting for more

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