by marjukes
Good story line. A great opening story to what can be multi chapters. Remember don't try to write a novel, just a good story. I also have stories on this site under ud1234. I write only real life. I think you have agood pace and well worded story. watch out for trolls. They abound here.
Loving this story so far! Looking forward to how it progresses! 5*****
More please and soon. so hot n sexy so far. Eager to know where this goes and what the consequences will be. Well done for your first story. Thank you
Very enjoyable & hot story. Enjoyed reading it. Additional chapters would be welcomed.
Loved it!! Now you need to finish it with mother and son making love and then him beating the shit out of his worthless dad!!! You can't leave us hanging like this! And when is the incest going to start????????? Gave it 5 stars!
Cool moms like Mia lke to tease son and friends. It is fun and many good things may happen