by Lovecraft_Lore
Reminds me of a Stephen King type short. You could always write the longer version later lol. Nice work.
I'm not sure what was happening in this story, maybe its the second thing to go when you turn 80? I didn't vote cause my Alzheimers kicked in, where was I?
An outstanding adaptation of fiction to fact. Loved it, and irrespective of two (yeah, that's 2) misspelled words--quite well written in all the categories that Writers' Workshop criteria stipulate as being necessary to accomplish the task. Hell of a creative imagination LL. More please.
MLJ
Well, I'm pretty smart and I gave up midway through cause I either didn't understand or didn't care about this story...
Started to read this, got lost and started again. Then it simply occurred to me that the author was trying to be, what, clever? I lost track and then I lost interest.
So, lots of people will probably not get the references, but the story itself just isn't good either. It's more of a blurb than anything else. Writer did themselves a huge disservice with the stupid word limit.