All Comments on 'A Pill for Potency Pt. 01'

You need to find an English language editor to make this readable before posting any more of it.

Here's a clue: If you've written 2300 words, and the story isn't finished, your next step is to write more, NOT to post what you have as "Part 1,"

Being Ukrainian, I just couldn't read this shit. 1* because I can't give it a minus score.

Is it Google translated?

WTF did I try to read.

I like this. It doesn't bother me, that the authors first language clearly isn't English.

His meaning was apparent at all times and he used a number of interesting word choices and phrases. I hate vanilla, workmanlike English, with its over emphasis on spelling and grammar (stop with the spelling bees, North Americans) His writing gave a real sense of place, and local culture.

An excellent start. Please continue.

Language is a living thing. There are no hard and fast rules, other than the ones people have made up, and thrust upon you.

Nobody owns the English language. Shakespeare made up words and idioms all the time. Nobody questions that.

As I said, interesting start author. Please continue.

WTF did I try to read?

Sorry, virtually unreadable.

Same old femdom-fetish-cuck unrealistic fantasy. Tons of these ones already here.