All Comments on 'A Pinch of Love'

Simply delicious in a dreamy creamy kinda way, with strong potential to continue.

I was hoping for sabrina to fuck cody's brains out

That was not only delightfully dirty smut, it was well-written smut. You know your craft well! I sincerely hope for a sequel.

I hope there is more chapters too come please x

I loved you story. I hope you have more soon. Maybe have Sabrina take him home after work, and fuck his brains out. Pain is always there the first time. Taking it semi easy the first time, then sort of just go nuts with lust and not hold back. Anyway good first part. Please more.

Not only is this well written but there is so much more to explore between these two. Please this needs at least 4 more chapters.

Amazing

Talented storytelling. Excellent plot.

But questions remain!

How is their work relationship progressing further. Are they becoming more bolder around others. Fear of being caught during acts!? Once passion breaks the ceiling do they start living together? Submissive as he is, will he be moving to her place?

You have more "gaps" left to explore!

Story definitely deserves more chapters!!!

I guess my main criticism is that I hate it when stories shift perspectives. It's like I really get into the story, self inserting as the guy typically, and then suddenly the story is being told from the other character's perspective and I'm just like, eh. Pulls me right out of the trance.

I’ve read most of your stories and I can honestly say I think this is your best one. Not only is your writing just pristine with little to no spelling or grammar mistakes, but I was actually interested in the characters and set up behind the erotica. It’s not the first time you’ve done that, but for me, it was the most effective time. Thank you

This was an amazing read and is definitely your best work.

Wow wow wow, I can't believe how good this is, seriously one of the best I've ever read

This was a great story, and I would love to read more about how their relationship/sex/work progresses and how much better and kinkier it might get!!! Thanks for sharing!

First story of yours I've read, I loved it! I can't wait to pick another. Thanks

Thanks for the great story, more please

pls more

Amazing !

This deserves a followup. so many possible directions this story can take.

Thank you for this start...