All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 07'

Good, but Aiden needs to start to make some actual decisions. Rosa is a cunt, Mara a fantasy. Kat holds promise.

I agree with Moonbat74. Maybe hang around Mara for awhile longer to find out if whether or not he's becoming Mara's Gigolo or not. Money maybe good, but? 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great story. Is Rosa toast?

I really like this story. I think it's fine to slow play it the way you are. A new chapter every few days while you develop the characters and we get to know them better. I think your writing is very good and the plot flows along well. Thank you for your effort and commitment to quality.

Aiden is going nowhere but burrowing into introspection and seems incapable of action or decision. Kat seems like nothing but a FWB. Well written but really starting to drag along.

Your story is amazing I look forward to every chap

All those things @Moonbat74.... if you don't have a plan, then you're part of someone else's

Molasses in freezing temps; dragging it out for the sake if whatever!!!!

Jeez why doesn't he just move on from Rosa and start a new life. War and peace is shorter than this grind.

Rosa? Who is she anyway.

Rosa and Aidan's split is covered in oneagainst's Oxygen Games

Sorry SamYork. That comment was strictly sarcasm. I am truly enjoying your story!!!

No worries mate!

I just got to chapter 7, life is too short to comment on every chapter but time to say, I'm enjoying the story. I usually try not to read the chapter summaries so as not to spoil the ending but I noticed one possiblity gone, not that it was a surprise.

Enjoying the writing, well done.